ext_76919 ([identity profile] drama-duchess.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ofscarletwoman 2005-05-16 02:05 am (UTC)

Then I chew on the inside of my cheek out of worry when he pulls his hands apart and starts pulling at them, like he's trying to tear the skin right off of himself.

My heart. It breaks.

This was beautiful in a very simple, quite way. You've got a lovely handle on both Harry and Ron and how their relationship works, including the passionate male friendship aspect of it. I melted and sighed while reading. Very effective writing!



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