As always I love your writting style, but here you have captured the inner termoil as well as the growth of Millicent and all fat girls beautifully. The anxious self hate girls and women feel is very real, and the language you use gives it a non-whinny voice.
I was quite pleased at the kick Theodore recieved, much deserved really. You give Draco a charactor depth I appreciate.

Well done.

Thank you.