Oh what a great story! I was so excited to read it since you mentioned you were working on it.

I think you did an excellent job on this and on your development of Millicent and of Draco. It was so touching and tender. The emotions and conflicts felt so real. I agree with cjmarlowe very much. Its a very real story. I love the way you dealt with the story and the development within it. I even love creepy!Theo. I hope you write more of these characters in some incarnation or another.

I wish I had better, more coherent and useful things to say but my brain is very tired and needs rest. Tomorrow, sioniann and I are taking my son to the Children's Museum with some RL friends of mine. And I've been staying up entirely too late! Eeeep!