This was GREAT!!! I've been looking forward to it ever since you first mentioned it. I have a bit of a soft spot for Millicent; I was the short and brainy (rather than tall and slow) but I was still a fat girl in high school and I never could tell when people were laughing with me or at me. I liked that this was almost totally about dynamics within Slytherin; Millicent thought she knew her place there but obviously things changed during sixth year. Theo Nott was an asswipe. I felt bad for Colin, because he was obviously led on by Pansy and her girl gang. Pansy was appropriate screechy and annoying. Your Draco was the most sympathetic (or least obnoxious) I think I've ever read.

I'm glad I ventured outside Gryffindor for a change ;)