ext_40712 ([identity profile] noticeably.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ofscarletwoman 2006-01-23 10:41 pm (UTC)

"Me three," James breathes, watching the way Ron's and Hermione's shoulders brush against Harry's when they sit on either side of him, the way they both reach for him, the way Harry is surrounded by two people who obviously love him very much.

Maybe three isn't too many here after all.


Oh, this is so gorgeous. It's so...kdjgdslkjgh. It hurts and I love it and I really like how you used James, here. The Trio is always an interesting dynamic, but to see it through James eyes really takes it to a new level.

Great job. :)

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