Oh, unbelievable, I'm sorry for being repetitive, but genius like this has to be recognised - your Michael is brilliant. Everything, everything, everything, it's just that I can imagine him saying all of that, and I think it's freaking genius. I can't say how much I love the way you've written him - just - awesome job with him.

I like that Jim eventually goes to find Ryan because he's the sort of nice guy who does things like that even if he may not have really wanted to initially.

And I love the pencil, in that last part with them; the way he plays with it and the way she grabs it lightly at the end. There's something really symbolic about it but I'm really too tired to process it right now.

I love this as a whle, though. :D Great job!