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ofscarletwoman ([personal profile] ofscarletwoman) wrote2004-12-27 11:01 am
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FICLET: Remembrances, Ron/Hermione, PG-13

Title: Remembrances
Author: Tarie
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 308
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] violet_quill's Dice and Lego Drabble Challenge. My challenge was Ron/Hermione in the Shrieking Shack. This was supposed to be a drabble but it's a bit long so I suppose it's a ficlet!

He sank down on the rickety old four-poster bed with its dusty hangings, a broken shell of a man. Resting his elbows on his knees, he pressed the heel of his palm against his forehead and stared blankly at the floor, looking right through it.

“D’you remember?” he asked hoarsely.

The mattress sank under her added weight. Her shoulder brushed against his but he barely felt it. Numb. So fucking numb.

“I remember.”

“What did I say?”

“Don’t--” She sounded so tired, so afraid. Of him?

Say it,” he snapped.

If you want to kill Harry, you’ll have to kill us too....You’ll have to kill all three of us.

He coughed, a rattling, dry cough that shook him to his very bones. “I meant it,” he rasped, raising his head out of his hands and looking at her, piercing her very soul with those haunted, soulful eyes of his.

“You did,” she murmured. She looked so old, he thought. Old but beautiful still. He’d always thought her beautiful, just as Harry did.

“I fucked up,” he said finally after a lengthy silence, voice breaking. “I tried. I tried to--”

We tried,” she corrected, pulling him close in an embrace, crushing him against her chest. “Are- you are sure....?” Tentative.

“Yeah.” He licked his lips, suppressing a shudder that threatened to shoot through his body. “You?”

His answer came in form of a kiss – the kind of kiss a dying lover gives you using the last of their strength and the last of their breath.

Pulling back.

They nodded at one another, producing their wands.

He looked around that ramshackled room, blinking back tears. This is where it had really began, he thought.

“We’ll see you soon,” he mumbled.

Wands trained on one another.

Two voices rose in the heavy air.

Avada Kedavra!”
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[personal profile] dsneyvoice 2004-12-27 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
!!!!!!!!!

Oh.My.GAWD. That was just....WAH!!!!! SO intense. Poor Trio!

Wow. That just gets you.right.there.

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Woe! I just couldn't figure how anything more than DOOM to make it work in the shack! *sniffles*
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[personal profile] ceilidh 2004-12-27 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. :-ss Poor Ron and Hermione. :(

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
:((((( I will have to make it up to them somehow!

[identity profile] shocolate.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

*sobs*

Though you're right.

[identity profile] annearchy.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
!!!!!!!!!!!! omfgwtf!!!! *sobs*

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*sobs with you*

[identity profile] angel423.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
eep.

Yep. Sniffling now :( Poor woobs!

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
:( I was so mean to them!

[identity profile] amoeba-j.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
::sobs uncontrollably::

::totters off to take monthly meds::

you gotta warn me first when I'm hormonal!! but that was *so* well-written that I'll let you off the hook for my tears this time ;)

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry! I am always really unsure about warning for things like Character death and other Big Plot thingers before the cut...I shall have to figure out a way to warn without giving too much away in the future!

[identity profile] aidara.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. I have to join everyone else in my RACKING SOBS. ;D Very beautiful.

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D
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[identity profile] chickadilly.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
WAH!!! :( That was so sad, powerful and just ... WAH!!!

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :(( I will make it up to Ron somehow!

[identity profile] coolteamblt.livejournal.com 2004-12-27 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniffle* WAH! That was so sad, and touching, and powerful. Thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading! I'm glad it touched you!

[identity profile] mononwalker.livejournal.com 2004-12-30 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
No.Words.

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-01-04 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. I was rather mean. *scuffs toe*
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[identity profile] leelastarsky.livejournal.com 2005-03-08 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
*screams* Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

:~(

*sobs*
I didn't see that coming at all.

[identity profile] ofscarletwoman.livejournal.com 2005-03-14 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Wah, sorry about that! I was in a rather dark mood the day I wrote this. I'll have to make it up to them somehow!

[identity profile] caitiedidit.livejournal.com 2005-07-28 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
!!!!

Wow, totally unexpected. Enjoyed, but dude. *wanders off in search of fluff*

[identity profile] srj4-ron.livejournal.com 2007-10-18 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
ohmygawd! that was soo full of love and angst! hail trio!am sure their friendship will survive death into eternity. good work.